The synopsis,ideas,script extract and evaluation of a self written screenplay

Synopsis Rachel Stevenson is a legal secretary, a job she pursued to avenge the fact her childhood abductor, Elijah Matthews, escaped justice due to legal technicality. The story is told in flashback, to her policeman rescuers; After a surprise run in with Elijah in the company lift, she discovers her law firm is defending him on a charge of abducting Emily, another little girl who has never been found. When Rachel looks into her own …

…heightened reality techniques, which I would have employed throughout the rest of the screen play. I chose not to name the Policeman so that the audience does not identify him as an important character to the narrative, which would add to the surprise and "twist" feeling of the ending, when we realize that he is a ring member. Overall, I think that I communicated the essence of the film, building enigmas and engaging the audience,